Guest Shadix Posted March 31, 2008 Report Share Posted March 31, 2008 camp dot misterworm dot net/shadixstash/secludedshore2.mp3 crits? I'm pretty proud of how this is turning out. Tropicalesque song. ---- Original post: I thought I post a bit of music I've been working with it. This piece is called Slick and Smooth right now and is one of my main projects to finish. camp dot misterworm dot net/shadixstash/slick3.mp3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mark the Echidna Posted March 31, 2008 Report Share Posted March 31, 2008 This is awesome, man! The beginning kinda reminds me of some of the Rouge levels on SA2. Pretty good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rael0505 Posted March 31, 2008 Report Share Posted March 31, 2008 You showed me this last night and I kept listening to it over and over. Good stuff. Great drumkit too. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SefirothDB Posted March 31, 2008 Report Share Posted March 31, 2008 As I mentioned, you've got to fix the piano partiture to avoid the chaotic feel in some parts. Removing it is one option but that leaves a "hole" in the song, it'd be better to rearrange the notes so it mixes better with the main tune. Other than that, it's got a good beat going on :3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Slingerland Posted March 31, 2008 Report Share Posted March 31, 2008 Something keeps irking me every couple of seconds. Like the instruments, most notably, the drums and piano, are off-beat/skip a beat. That, and the horns sound like ass. What program did you make this in? It sounds like loop software. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Shadix Posted April 1, 2008 Report Share Posted April 1, 2008 Something keeps irking me every couple of seconds. Like the instruments, most notably, the drums and piano, are off-beat/skip a beat. That, and the horns sound like ass.What program did you make this in? It sounds like loop software. Well, it is syncopated, however I do not know whether that is really the problem you are addressing or not, because Aerosol already addressed to me some structural issues that are impeding the "beat" of the song, and I have a feeling the velocities are screwed up too. If you want here is the composition before I went and fucked it up trying to embellish it. camp dot misterworm dot net/shadixstash/smoothjamrock.mp3 Part 2: "Boom" Very liberal remix of a certain song. camp dot misterworm dot net/shadixstash/boom10.mp3 Be expecting some form of live guitar when that is finished. Edit: I should also note that the end isn't really attached to the end so to speak, there is like a block of song missing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Streak Thunderstorm Posted April 1, 2008 Report Share Posted April 1, 2008 I think I has a shuvel. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Shadix Posted April 22, 2008 Report Share Posted April 22, 2008 New Track I'm working on: camp dot misterworm dot net/shadixstash/secludedshore2.mp3 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rael0505 Posted May 3, 2008 Report Share Posted May 3, 2008 I love this way more than palmtree panic, I would totally use it. Amazing stuff. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Serephim Posted May 3, 2008 Report Share Posted May 3, 2008 Shadix, this is some pretty neat stuff your coming up with. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Shadix Posted May 13, 2008 Report Share Posted May 13, 2008 It's a shame I don't have more control over this creative process. I'm a monster of hit and miss. XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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