Hey man, that was really good! Not my genre, but I wanna hear some more of your stuff
There's just a couple tweaks that I feel could make the song a little more polished. The guitar sounds a bit muffled - if that's the right word, so I'd do some EQ work. Maybe bring up the highs and cut off some of the mud and low mids (250-400 Hz), but just experiment around.
I'd personally also cut out that last strumming bit starting at 2:31, but that's just a personal preference thing.
Again, that was really good. Keep it up! Hope I could help!