hRook Posted July 17, 2006 Report Share Posted July 17, 2006 This is a song my band is to play. The sine wave (synthy sound) is supposed to be a vocal melody... So here it is. http://www.astygmatyzm.com/songwriting/Three%20Day%20Pass%20-%20The%20Truth%20to%20be%20Told%20(Synth).mp3 When I stepped out of the door I remembered when All the world turned to gold Then it faded to black I'll tell you of the stories you thought you tore from me; but you never knew that I had the mark Check your hands, aren't they painted By the same Monet? But why don't I [Chorus] Know. Where am I? I'm running, running out of truth to be told Where am I? Your hiding days are up This I know, when I heard her last goodbye I could see your eyes They were shaking with fear I just want to [Chorus] Choir now, Allelujia. Close all the doors Follow suit, there's mine, there's yours Don't fake your life, it's all true, that smile never fit on you [Aahs to End] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Duckboy Posted July 17, 2006 Report Share Posted July 17, 2006 That's SO much better without the insanely godawful vocalist. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hRook Posted July 17, 2006 Author Report Share Posted July 17, 2006 Go ____ yourself. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
twodee Posted July 17, 2006 Report Share Posted July 17, 2006 What I said on AIM. And Duckboy, while I agree that his vocalist isn't that amazing, but it doesn't help to be overly critical. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Duckboy Posted July 17, 2006 Report Share Posted July 17, 2006 Hey the music's awesome. (yes even the drums ) But since I now know that the vocalist isn't you, I won't sugarcoat that I think he's bad. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hRook Posted July 17, 2006 Author Report Share Posted July 17, 2006 Deal. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
VectorSatyr Posted July 17, 2006 Report Share Posted July 17, 2006 I've always disliked that vocalist, but at least he's getting better. EDIT: Ahh... a light ballad. It's very soothing. The harmony at 1:46 is a bit off in my ears. If you did that on purpose, I can understand. But it sort of disrupted the melody. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rael0505 Posted July 17, 2006 Report Share Posted July 17, 2006 Sounds good, Hunter, though the slayers guitars are a bit hard on the ears. Look forward to hearing it played by the band. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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