Streak Thunderstorm Posted December 6, 2006 Report Share Posted December 6, 2006 Her: Now, keep in mind... this is a WIP. Any suggestions? Help would be greatly appreciated. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mark the Echidna Posted December 6, 2006 Report Share Posted December 6, 2006 It's looking good. I would only narrow and close her eyes a little bit. Also, I see there's something wrong with the lips, thought I can't exactly identify what it is. Other than that, it's pretty good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Shadix Posted December 6, 2006 Report Share Posted December 6, 2006 The lips seem pretty fine to me, the only problem I see are that the eyebrows don't look right. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Streak Thunderstorm Posted December 6, 2006 Author Report Share Posted December 6, 2006 I actually fixed all of that and colored it today. I will scan today or tomorrow. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Draco Icebane Posted December 7, 2006 Report Share Posted December 7, 2006 I can't judge it with no hair. Seriously. Gotta add hair, even if it's a sketch, because getting the face 100% right but not having added the hair yet will make it difficult to tell if it looks right anyway. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Streak Thunderstorm Posted December 8, 2006 Author Report Share Posted December 8, 2006 Completed. Please escuse the creases... something happened to the picture... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
StarKrafter Posted December 9, 2006 Report Share Posted December 9, 2006 Are you using other colors to blend your colored pencils? If so I think you should start mixing more purples and blues (possibly red) to the shaded areas in order to darken them, and create a greater sense of depth. Either way, it's a nicely done piece. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Streak Thunderstorm Posted December 9, 2006 Author Report Share Posted December 9, 2006 Thankyou, sir. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zal Posted December 14, 2006 Report Share Posted December 14, 2006 A few minor things, if you don't mind me saying so. Dimple lines (the lines on her cheeks), shouldn't be there. Blending the colours together would do the trick just as well. The right eye (real right or left to us) is slightly more closed than the other. She looks as though she's squinting a bit. And finally her nose seems a bit shorter (only a bit) in your drawing in comparison to the photo. Very good job though. Believe me I couldn't do better. Keep it up, James. By the way I hope you don't mind me calling you James although I think you will, but I can't stand calling you Streak. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Streak Thunderstorm Posted December 14, 2006 Author Report Share Posted December 14, 2006 Nah. It's cool. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FuzzMaster Posted December 22, 2006 Report Share Posted December 22, 2006 Poor girl. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MidimanNull Posted December 22, 2006 Report Share Posted December 22, 2006 Generic Fuzz Arrogance Generic suggestion to please stop posting useless text. Notation that this post is dignified as it is an announcement. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Streak Thunderstorm Posted December 23, 2006 Author Report Share Posted December 23, 2006 What's worse is that you bumped an old topic. Even though it was still on the first page [Nobody really posts are anymore.] but you bumped like.. a week old topic. Enjoy your fail dillhole. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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