I'm sorry, gentleman. You know, it's not my native language so... Try harder, you shall understand whatever you did not.About your screen... The sand pattern doesn't look good, to simulate sand it should be more messed up, more "noisy". The "gradient" dithering for the fading needs some work as well. Same thing for the Chao stuff (which I presume it's a chao garden entrance), looks very flat, it needs a better shading as well. Nice background, anyways. I supose it rotates? C: