It's how I naturally sound. I'm not trying to bite him in any sense. IT's how my voice is. I know I gotta switch that up, but I'd rather be natural than force something which would sound un-authentic and fake, if you get what I'm saying.
as for metas and wordplay, yeah, i use to write a lot of those. I don't know, after doing the whole battle thing where everything was focused on that aspect of it, I'm kind of over a lot of it. I write mainly to get my feelings and thoughts out.
But I do appreciate any comments I can get... so thanks for that. I hope you at least liked it.
EDIT. Also, about Shadowville... they ARE free, but they still require credit towards them.